LO4 - Showing conventions of the genre - article

In the article on the left the left page is taken up entirely by an image related to the game in question and the right page is taken up by the article itself.

LO4 - Showing conventions of the genre - contents

• While the one on the left has more colour it still has the same basic aspects as mine, with what's in the magzine on the left of the page and images of content on the right.

LO4 - Showing conventions of the genre - cover

• At the bottom of the front page there is usually some mention of what will be inside the issue. This is present in both my magazine  
• The name of the game on the cover is in roughly the same place on both cover 
• The issue number is under the title on both covers. 

LO4: Editing Proof

LO3 - Peer Assesment

Work reviewed: MGSV review


Feedback:
Grade recieved: Merit
Because thr review feels written from a personal standpoint.
And it reads like a review from an actual magazine.

Self relection: I feel as though this review is as good as I can make it and cannot think of anything else I can add to improve it.